First draft // social media feedback

I posted my music video onto Twitter in an attempt to receive feedback and responses. Those who responded do fit into the target audience for Scott Garcia, so this feedback is very useful. Here is what they said:

There wasn't any proper constructive criticism here, but receiving such good responses shows how our video is on the right track, and most importantly, appeals to my target audience.

First draft // feedback

 This is the feedback we received throughout the feedback of our first draft. As you can see, we did receive a lot of positive feedback. With some even saying they like "Everything really" and " good pace".

Some of the things that need developing is that we need to hold on the rabbit signs need to last a little bit longer as the audience need to be able to read them. Also, we were advised to add colour to the strobe lighting effect part of the music video, and make it "proper mental".

We have taken this advise on board, and we have decided we will change the colour of the strobe part, making it look like a rainbow of colours. We also have decided that it would be good to make the signs last longer so people can understand why they are there.

Digipak poster // audience poll results

Above are the voting results based on my target audiences response to my digipak designs. I asked them to view all the different variants to my digipaks and then decide which they feel is best.

In last place was digipak 4, receiving no votes whatsoever:

Digipak 3 received a single vote, so therefore will not be considered any longer:

Digipak 5 did slightly better, receiving 5 votes, but not enough to be my final digipak:

Digipak 2 also received 5 votes, but again not enough to win this poll:

In second place was digipak 1, which received an outstanding 12 votes, but just missed out in becoming the final digipak:

The winner of the poll was digipak 5, with 13 votes. This will now be my final digipak design:

Tutorial

The pitch // feedback

We received feedback on our pitch. The feedback was pretty positive, with people saying they like the logo, name, music video idea, genre and various other elements.

Things that need developing:

The main feedback we received about developing is the location of a club. We are going to film the outside of a club, then ask the drama department when they have free rooms, uses their lighting and make it look like a club scene. Also, people have said that they feel the target audience needs to be expanded up to 30 years old. We have took this into consideration, and have decided to do so as we realised they do still go clubbing and they would be hearing this type of music.

Overall, we were very impressed with the feedback we received, as it shows that we are on the correct track and shows that our idea is so far successful.

Blog feedback