Thursday 30 January 2014

First draft // feedback









 This is the feedback we received throughout the feedback of our first draft. As you can see, we did receive a lot of positive feedback. With some even saying they like "Everything really" and " good pace".

Some of the things that need developing is that we need to hold on the rabbit signs need to last a little bit longer as the audience need to be able to read them. Also, we were advised to add colour to the strobe lighting effect part of the music video, and make it "proper mental".

We have taken this advise on board, and we have decided we will change the colour of the strobe part, making it look like a rainbow of colours. We also have decided that it would be good to make the signs last longer so people can understand why they are there.





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